It’s a valid concern—especially when model essays seem rich with references to global events, statistics, and case studies, and teachers often point out that your arguments lack solid evidence.
Yes, because examples:
- Make your argument more persuasive.
- Demonstrate that you’re informed about current affairs.
- Show that you can link global and local issues to the essay topic.
But no:
- Focus on quality, not quantity.
- Avoid irrelevant examples. Not every example fits every argument. If it doesn’t support your point, leave it out.
- Don’t example dump. The marker’s looking for a coherent, insightful argument, not a list of examples.
In conclusion, yes, you need examples in your GP essay, but be selective and strategic about it. The marker is more concerned about how well you argue and apply your examples than how much you know.
